Friendship

some ships sink while others float
but one is there inside you
you may not feel it while it's afloat
but it is still there...smiling

Providing Feedback

Some people say that my writing doesn't sound like a nine year old wrote it so I want to see what the world thinks so if you can please provide some feedback about my work and tell me what I should improve on or what I wrote nicely and why you think it is nice I would be very thankful.

The Earth

The Earth

Do you think about the Earth

That's what I always say

Do you care if it is gone

And there is no where else to stay

Well say yes if you agree

If you don't then just flee

Don't you see what is around

Don't you know what it is you need

All we need is you to make this world a better place

So place your heart where it is right

And don't start a fight...Between you and THE EARTH